Wednesday, April 29, 2009
Your Eyes Comments
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Why does my world revolve around you?
Smaller, tighter,
I can’t seem to get away.
You’re just another black hole,
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7/29/2025 12:05:25 PM # 1.0.0
And their eyes meet across the room...another great pinpointing of a common emotion, darling. The 'black hole' metaphor is apt, and your first line is a fantastic 'grabber'. Well done.