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very very nice piece of writting. you put whats in your head onto paper very well. nice work

It gives me a rush of emotions, from both sides... It kind of makes me sad, there is only one person I can ask those questions and I would never be able to be with them... Good write anyway...

i like your description of this crush. nice poem.

Millie! ! ! ! ! Simply excellent - you get better & better! To me this is dying to be set to music: it has the structure of a great lyric & a tune wouldn't take away from the sheer punch of the words. Keep on writing, you have a great gift. Thank you. WBB

WOW...thats really the only inteligent thing I can say...This was AMAZING! ! ! ...Holy Crow...You got talent! ! ! ! ..... <3Payy

I love how you put this poem together. I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing. =)