Sunday, December 14, 2008

Your Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's a warm wind blowing from southern skies
Under a December evening's full moon
These silver-lined clouds will drift away soon
For some reason, I'm dreaming of your eyes
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Danny Speicher
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Tymon White 17 May 2013

Your poetry is indeed rare. It is hard to poetry that is just as honest, eloquent, rhythmical, a truly beautiful. Poetry is generally quite subjective, but I think this is an amazing piece of work. I also like the particular rhyme pattern used in this one, its refreshingly different.

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Fiona Davidson 14 December 2008

What a beautiful honest piece this is...thanks for sharing...

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Danny Speicher

Danny Speicher

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