Wednesday, September 12, 2007

Your Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Soft is the wind
that blows through your hair.
Warm is the love,
we both share.
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David Harris
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Patti Masterman 31 October 2009

Sounds like some beautiful eyes for sure. Had some green eyes in my family; my grandmother was soothing as the sea; mother was passionate like a distant thunder storm! You didn't mess around with her too long! (smile)

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Melvina Germain 18 January 2008

Ahh this is so pretty, I like the feel of it. Another beautiful write David. Melvina

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 13 September 2007

This is a romantic little number from Mr I.M. NOT ROMANTIC... love this excuse me i have some beautiful eyes of my own to write about...10

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Alison Cassidy 12 September 2007

'And when we argue I usually let you win' Now that's devotion for you. A sweetly voiced piece about an significant pair of green peepers, methinks. love, Allie xxxx

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Beautiful David. I'm guessing that anniversary inspires you! :) t x

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David Barlow 12 September 2007

Lovely romantic and innocent Poem David. Stands the test of time very well. Thank you for sharing it. Take care and have fun, David

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Polar Bear 12 September 2007

i like this alot, its very sweet :)

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David Harris

David Harris

Bradfield, England
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