Monday, June 7, 2021

Your Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beside the railway
barefooted I walk~
As twilight descends
old pavement darkens
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Jez Burl
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Anjandev Roy 04 September 2022

This is excellent piece....thank u....

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Susan Williams 23 July 2022

Very elegant presentation of pain and longing resolved! 5 stars

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 October 2021

Please keep writing, I miss you so very much in this difficul new Poem Hunter Hompepage. Thank you for sharing!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 October 2021

I cite you here dear Jez: As you came to me with eyes effulgent melting in my dreams my torch returning and I no longer wander in the dark. So very true, amazing poem so gorgeously written, very beautiful and youching, dear Jez.

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