Your Eyes Comments

Wow. Strong emotions, in just a few lines, hit you hard. Looking beyond the simple appearance, you feel the presence of a soul in pain. Hang in there my friend. I wish, a white cloud, push the dark clouds of your sky away.

A poem of few words, but, Looking beyond the words placed as you so skillfully did, I see more than words, your emotions carry me to a higher level, Where I recognize a poetess of exceptional ability, you let your command of words bow to the readers perception Of your words with uncertainty of the point at case, willing to risk the meaning going unnoticed, my friend, this I so admire in a poet! ! ! ! Wow, I hope others pick up up on how great a poem this is! ! !