Your Eyes Comments

but an entity pulls me down, i thrash, flailing my arms and legs, Desperate. Bubbles rise from my throat, ......who says love does not kill, .. an allegoric poem. very nicely expatiated.. idea comes for the eyes. thank you very much for this poem. tony

Drowning in the brown orbs of lover's eyes and eventually the last line- unique.10

As i struggle to swim up! Nice work.

A wonderful Vision.... As I struggle to swim up, but an entity pulls me down, and then the last I drown into their utmost death, And who says, love doesn't kill? .. the intense power of Love...Awesome written...