Your Eyes Comments

This poem can be viewed from aesthetic angle. I am not sure if you are describing the eyes of your beloved who is a living God to you or eyes of your only protector, God... loved this fascinating poem.

Beyond words just EYES.............Lovely Poem NI....Loved it

Its passion increases with every read! Well done Nosheen!

Affection! Love and dreams. Nice work.

It cut through me like a dagger I couldn’t escape its fire I couldn’t break its chains How much of power, how much of magic....... how much of might, how much wizardry those eyes carried! It could equally ignite in you flames of passion as well as fear! Powerful portrayal..... Nosheen!

Pregnant with a passion that can only be felt by the heart and seen with eyes!

Your eyes, your eyes I loved and feared. I see fear of the poetess as her own inner fears of ecstasy that the wine of loving eyes can bring for her. An amazing poem.

love, experience, intimacy, passion, desire. all well expressed in your poem. thank you for this wonderful poem. tony