in the seas of your eyes
i see the reflection of
the sun rise and
the sun set
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I remember this when I looked into the eyes of my children thank you dear Indira
Pleasure of a moment lasts for a moment Pleasures collected from pain makes the moment..... a good write!
A loving and caring soul you have seeing the deep reflection of one's eyes! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Great poem indeed! ! ! ! Love it! ! ! ! ! !
Lucky you, the poet, who can see two seas and the sun rise and the sun set at the same time looking into someone's eyes! Beautiful poem!
Got omni vision still Poet quests for more and …well let poet say in next poem. Nice ten dr.sakti Cordially invite to my page. ds
This poem is against infidelity, is quite, super and wonderful.
Stunning Indeed, such beautiful poetry in every read... Andy 10
I often wondered why does a portrait look empty even though the frame is filled with the subject. Professional photographers always tell me that its the eyes that tells the story. Mostly shooting bespectacled subjects causes the glare to washout their eyes. Loved this poem not only for its artistic projection but also for its message that justifies the above problem. Thanks a lot! A sweet 10
A stunning and mystic poem on the reflection and depth of a loved one's eyes. I felt I was at the sea shore with you as your images were superb! 10 love Karin
ohh yes, and- 'your eyes are the eternity's expression of its absoluteness.'
i just loved the way you expressed the way you perceive that loved ones eyes.thanks ma'am.
You see everything in 'eyes'; but as you stroll along the sand on the sea shore...? ? ? to me, merger is not compete, indira.....otherwise how can you be subjective n objective? ? ? Or is it the case of vivid imagination; sort of possessed n obsessed....; sort of, being in trance..? ? ?
beautifully expressed feelings Indira - your eyes is a lovely piece
In you eyes … I see many unseen things too. Nice poem Didi Ten++ UK Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv