Thursday, October 1, 2009

Your Eyes Comments

Rating: 2.9

in the seas of your eyes
i see the reflection of
the sun rise and
the sun set
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indira babbellapati
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 October 2009

In you eyes … I see many unseen things too. Nice poem Didi Ten++ UK Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv

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Rachel Butler 10 October 2009

I see the mysterious depths Rachel Ann Butler

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Patrick A. Martin 09 October 2009

I remember this when I looked into the eyes of my children thank you dear Indira

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Allemagne Roßmann 09 October 2009

Pleasure of a moment lasts for a moment Pleasures collected from pain makes the moment..... a good write!

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Catrina Heart 07 October 2009

A loving and caring soul you have seeing the deep reflection of one's eyes! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Great poem indeed! ! ! ! Love it! ! ! ! ! !

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Onelia Avelar 07 October 2009

Lucky you, the poet, who can see two seas and the sun rise and the sun set at the same time looking into someone's eyes! Beautiful poem!

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 06 October 2009

Got omni vision still Poet quests for more and …well let poet say in next poem. Nice ten dr.sakti Cordially invite to my page. ds

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Obinna Eruchie 05 October 2009

The love in his eyes you see is expressed beautifully.

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Pitilosi Mdala 05 October 2009

This poem is against infidelity, is quite, super and wonderful.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 October 2009

beautiful mystic disclosure! nice phrasology!

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 05 October 2009

Stunning Indeed, such beautiful poetry in every read... Andy 10

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Ranjit Ravindran 04 October 2009

I often wondered why does a portrait look empty even though the frame is filled with the subject. Professional photographers always tell me that its the eyes that tells the story. Mostly shooting bespectacled subjects causes the glare to washout their eyes. Loved this poem not only for its artistic projection but also for its message that justifies the above problem. Thanks a lot! A sweet 10

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A stunning and mystic poem on the reflection and depth of a loved one's eyes. I felt I was at the sea shore with you as your images were superb! 10 love Karin

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 02 October 2009

ohh yes, and- 'your eyes are the eternity's expression of its absoluteness.'

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Maitreyee Joshi 01 October 2009

i just loved the way you expressed the way you perceive that loved ones eyes.thanks ma'am.

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Rakesh Bedi 01 October 2009

You see everything in 'eyes'; but as you stroll along the sand on the sea shore...? ? ? to me, merger is not compete, indira.....otherwise how can you be subjective n objective? ? ? Or is it the case of vivid imagination; sort of possessed n obsessed....; sort of, being in trance..? ? ?

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Sandra Martyres 01 October 2009

beautifully expressed feelings Indira - your eyes is a lovely piece

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Joseph Poewhit 01 October 2009

The eye's have it by a longshot

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rago rago 01 October 2009

your eyes just yes always remembering......and amazing.......

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Nouri Black 01 October 2009

wooow that really amzin, i loved it, i know how that feel ^_^

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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