Thursday, July 26, 2018

Your Ektara Is Moaning Still Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your last footsteps stay back with us
Your soul has gone to ever walking way
Your ungovernable body is now with shroud
Here untouched hearing follows me
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Mihaela Pirjol 22 October 2018

This is a great tribute! Poetically written!

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Akhtar Jawad 26 September 2018

A nice gratitude to a great musician and to a lovely musical instrument.

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Britte Ninad 19 August 2018

Lovely poem penned so strong in melancholic sense

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 August 2018

A very good poem coming out of sadness by a young poet don't dismay life has a long way go outside and play 7.5 billions for you yet stay give them all a smile and say friends come my way smile we may and see the wonders that will happen your smile will return you will move along the shore well then what do you want more love ashore assure ye all

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 July 2018

The boatman beseeches your corpse/You are now the native of that shore/Your departure through law of nature with tears of the moon/Because your Ektara is dumb and sightless; lives in all alone.....excellent poetic expression! A beautiful piece of work! (10)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 July 2018

Your departure through law of nature with tears of the moon Because your Ektara is dumb and sightless; lives in all alone.......so touching and impressive. Beautiful poem shared.

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 July 2018

A dire state of mind composes night with dazed dark I am in damp with thunder block burst Around of me jaunty bark of hound Lonely all here and your *Ektara of love- beautiful poem and a great eulogy.. than ku dear poet. tony

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