Ahh! once more the pang of my heart
takes me in that deep agony
of losing my smile
of burning in bile
...
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well balanced and well metered...melancholy theme through the eyes of experience...a sense of growth -Tailor
S2 L6 shoulf be were instead of was. Very nice, despite the minor error. Danny
Beautiful poem Nidhi....I loved reading your poem...Even the flow is good..Keep writing...
a beautiful poem Nidhi. Nice flow of words.