Tuesday, September 3, 2013

Your Departure Comments

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Ahh! once more the pang of my heart
takes me in that deep agony
of losing my smile
of burning in bile
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Nidhi Saxena
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Heather Wilkins 24 September 2013

a beautiful poem Nidhi. Nice flow of words.

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Tailor Bell 23 September 2013

well balanced and well metered...melancholy theme through the eyes of experience...a sense of growth -Tailor

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Abhishek Mishra 04 September 2013

well penned and amazingly written...: -)

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Dan Reynolds 04 September 2013

S2 L6 shoulf be were instead of was. Very nice, despite the minor error. Danny

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 September 2013

Beautiful poem Nidhi....I loved reading your poem...Even the flow is good..Keep writing...

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