Wednesday, March 5, 2008

Your Day Off Comments

Rating: 5.0

You’re lying in your bed,
it’s your day off
and you are going to enjoy it
just as much as you can.
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David Harris
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Tsira Goge 27 September 2008

And so David, does not exist free days on the earth! And that in the world, I do not know while... But I will calm you a little, soon there are an anachronism such phones. All it - with a smile. Itself poems it is very beautifully made, and not looking small harmless lie, very fair before readers... From me ten, David/// Sincerely, Tsira

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Duncan Wyllie 12 March 2008

Sorry David, I hope that I didn't disturb you, , I just wanted to pop in to say thankyou for your latest comment on my poem Also your poem here can be 'oh so true', , just when you you try and rest there the phone often rings, , ummm technology hey! ! it either works brilliantly for us or it gives us a wake up call Love duncan X

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 05 March 2008

Just have a mobile David, You can turn the dam thing off... Andy 10

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JoAnn McGrath 05 March 2008

You just described my morning...a snow day here too...thought a would enjoy the bed a little longer....but know the phone rings...twice...and the sun finally comes out and starts to melt all the icicles of the side of the roof...so I here that banging and clatter...no sense...just time to get up

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Dee Daffodil 05 March 2008

LOL...I can somewhat relate to this one, except that my days off are scattered all over the calandar. Today...was the second 'snow day' this week...and sooo...I lingered longer in bed...and quite enjoyed my cozy flannel sheets! Fortunately...the phone...did not ring! Hugs, Dee

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