Tuesday, September 18, 2012

Your Darker Side Comments

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The cord of life quickly unwound
as it follows its turns round and round
the pain She feels which knows no bounds
will hardly stop till she makes a sound
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John Dillenger II
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Logan Paul 18 September 2012

the cord of life is broken when the cord of life is broken then when love is lost my dear friend im sorry that it had to end her life is lost while shes still alive you only wish you were by her side but then life cord goes once more around to bind you up and tear her down. the churning sea of endless dreams and life without her too hard seems im sorry friend that you cant hide what you hate your Darker Side

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Sabrina Fuller 18 September 2012

Beautiful! That is so creative!

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