Wednesday, March 1, 2006

Your Dark Side Comments

Rating: ★2.9

solitude stands in the bar door
the place i go to find her

her lips like wine
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John Kipling Lewis
dark solitude
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K Holoholo 06 November 2007

It does not capture me at all. I think it could use some work of the words to fix it.

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Kath Moore 05 November 2007

3. Lacks imagery. Tells, doesn't show. Some errors - for example, 'trists' should be 'trysts.'

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John Kipling Lewis

John Kipling Lewis

Manhattan, KS
John Kipling Lewis
John Kipling Lewis
Manhattan, KS
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