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It is a splendid poem...a natural piece that brings nature's peace.

I like your frequent use of color!

A beautiful poem with picturesque words that breath love and life. Exquisite style that capture the feelings

I liked the mystery inherent in this poem, for love is a mystery we all wait on and hope to solve. Beautifully worded!

My 2nd? comment (see below) . In stanza two, i'd use 'me', not 'I', at the ends of two lines. bri : )

And at last it became a combination of love and beauty

And grace of recognition and life of concomition just is beautiful. Lovely reunion.

Bharati, i did a Google search for 'Bharati Nayak Poemhunter' in order to find this page. Well, the stated topic (#hashtag) is love, so maybe this is about two blending as one. Otherwise i'd find it TOO mysterious, though attractive a poem. bri ;) : ) bri

When you came, you came with the color.with the light and the music *****. *******. I no more remain I As I became you and you became I and together we become color.music and light and sing the song of life........much loving lines with deep love. Beautiful poem on love with captivating inscription.

coming his coming is light only we are playing to his music

Oh, what a marvelous poem it is! The beginning stanza is much fascinating. The concluding stanza says much about the deepness of love. Here it may be cited.....As I became you and you became I / and together we become color.music and light / and sing the song of life. Thank you dear Bharati madam for your beautiful penning of this poem. Full vote.

A gladsome poem! Before taking this beautiful piece of work to my list of favorite poems, I would love to quote some fascinating lines here, “Flowers were waiting to blossom/The breeze was waiting to caress the lovely branch/The roads were waiting for your feet to touch/The river was waiting to gurgle/ The butterfly was sitting with beautiful wings to spread/The birds were singing for your welcome”..Thank you for sharing..10

The truth is waiting for human heart. someone always waiting for someone, who lit the light in their heart. Great Poem

as if it is a dawn to come and brings all that in your lines to life! a thing that must inspire for every heart and the reader! thank you for sharing Poet! ! 10+++! ! !

absolutely beautiful, love finding its most complete expression. so loving and passionate, only a poetess of true love could write.

Colours! ! With the muse of the light. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A beautiful poem, being a woman I liked this poem very much.

Bharati, Lovely poem. When you came, you no more remain you...I no longer remain I. Yes, that is the effect of love. You and I are lost in WE. Rightly expressed. Excellent choice of words.

When you came, you came with the color.with the light and the music - a beautiful love poem. I enjoyed reading it.

Oh. My. Word. This is so incredibly beautiful. I want to read it every morning to give my day the right emotional and intellectual and spiritual setting. I bet a walk through that gentle mind of yours would be just as inspiring and lovely. This poem is so perfect I wish I could give it Poem of the Day myself!