Monday, January 1, 2018

Your Clothes And Shoes Full Of Dust Comments

Rating: 5.0

This world is not your home
You are a traveler, a passerby
Your clothes and shoes full of dust
Sometimes you walk in the desert
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Ravi Kopra
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M Asim Nehal 30 April 2021

Profound poem. Nicely written.5**

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Lyn Paul 01 January 2018

Thought provoking indeed. We are all just passing by! Wonderful Words.

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Ravi Kopra 01 January 2018

Thank you Lyn for your comment.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 January 2018

Ravi, such an interesting write...10++++++

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Ravi Kopra 01 January 2018

Thanks, Bernard.

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Shannon Walker 01 January 2018

I really liked the way you presented this idea.

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Ravi Kopra 01 January 2018

Thank you Shannon.

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