Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, May 6, 2014

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Think of only darkness
Or only brightness
What could have been left?
There could have been nothing to let
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Path to true sanity. Tracy Bollinger2 minutes ago Not being seduced fully by either darkness or light would be the ultimate victory.This made me think of the middle path. Very good!

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Lovely piece enjoyable to read Ging Alburo11 minutes ago Keep it up :) Comment 0

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Thoughtful Heidi Wilson10 minutes ago Good flow

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Shakespearan recital norbert3 minutes ago I think it is ok. The Shakespearean format gives it a classic style which strangely has the disadvantage of making it seem too poetic. Sometimes a poem arouses the most intense emotions when it does not seem too deliberate, when it feels like the poet just sat down and wrote down feelings, not structured sentences. It is a good poem for what it is, conventional poetry. But it certainly does not evoke intense emotions Comment 0

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Nicely written Jessica Cooley10 minutes ago I got to say your good at writing.. Great I say. :)

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Think of only darkness Or only brightness

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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