Thursday, September 17, 2009

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Rating: 4.7

The howling wind that has no life,
Seeks my own with both blood and knife;
But in my God I will stand strong,
And if It think it’d win, it's dead wrong.
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Leslie Alexis
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Bernard Snyder 31 July 2015

Nice poem Alexei! Great read to start my day! Thank you!

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 July 2015

The blood of your hand is part of the wickedness of mankind. Nice work

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 08 April 2010

‘…But the Lord shall look and say ‘I know you not.’…’ Sir is god not Omnimerciful? Doesn’t He know our limitation…even if we choose Dirt? Is He not our Father…should He us to teach thro’ sufferings and punishment… ‘…upon your body great worms shall feast, .. I trust in that God…Who will lead me from Darkness to Light not thro’ suffering but by mercy … Ms. Nivedita UK

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Dragon Wizard 16 October 2009

An extraordinary literary piece! Profound and very Spiritual, Quite beautiful indeed! You leave me speechless! My humble 10 for you, dear friend! Dragon Wizard

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Eyan Desir 29 September 2009

The wrath of hell Or the sweetest beauty ever seen Still life is so complex We are just weak vessels Who believe we are strong 10s

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Shawnee Gonzalez 28 September 2009

'the day in which the past repeats is the day that god shall let you repent...' very good write i liked the word choice. ♥ §hawnee♥

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 26 September 2009

a strong and classy write...very impressive...10

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Winnie Angel 25 September 2009

Very impressive..use of words been very forceful..Winnie

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Lynda Robson 22 September 2009

Well written and very strongly worded Les, 10 Lynda xx

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 September 2009

The howling wind that has no life, Seeks my own with both blood and knife; But in my God I will stand strong, And if It think it’d win, it's dead wrong..very good and powerful theme as He knows what is wrong or right......10 read mine o, lord....prayer...humble submission

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C. P. Sharma 19 September 2009

A forceful awe inspiring plea. CP

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Carl Harris 19 September 2009

Well, you are right, it is a different poem for you, Leslie. It was indeed powerful and if you'll forgive me, it sounded more like a sermon than a poem. Carl.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 19 September 2009

Very powerful and expressive poem, Leslie. Contents are rich and knowledge oriented. The last stanza is more precious than diamonds. But it's one's own choice, as you said........10/10.

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Yes, this must be read by a famous actor (maybe you Leslie) and I am sure it would impress all those who hear it. Strong and emotive and I am in awe of of your powerful words! 10 Karin

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Rehana Nazli 19 September 2009

Very strong lashing out Les. Is there anymore left to scorn her? Poem is written beautifully though.

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Lady Grace 19 September 2009

for me les, this is a good declamation...a very expressive one to be spoken in front of many crowds..you got this choice..it inspires me..lav this dear friend..

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Anjali Sinha 19 September 2009

oops Les! ! ! ! blood, dagger and Lady Macbeth you said that emphatically 'Such are the elect, who shall sit with him in Paradise. ' I love your poems God Bless You dear lots of love anjali -10

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Danny H 18 September 2009

Great Emotion, i love the deliberate tounge lashing. So much faith and beliefs it was one of your best poems yet!

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 18 September 2009

good job les! symbolic and significant...

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Sanjib Das 18 September 2009

IT'S A NICELY WRITTEN WITH FULL OF VIVACITY. KEEP IT UP 10/10

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