Thursday, June 10, 2021

Your Charming Smile Is Lavish Splendor Comments

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Your charming smile is lavish splendor
Your moving eyes are black & white wonder
You walk in an angelic manner
All these I always admire!
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KAVIN CHARALAN
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M Asim Nehal 11 June 2021

You missed Indian beauty. Happy hips, sign language etc. Never the less a fine poem.

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Varsha M 10 June 2021

Beautiful admiration. Beautiful rhyming poem. Nice play of simile and metaphorical flow.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 June 2021

Captivating poetic expression... wonderful! The title speaks all about the core of the poem! A fascinating read! !

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