Monday, January 27, 2014

Your Charming Portrait In My Heart! Comments

Rating: 5.0

I had an antique frame in my heart,
Blanked it looked until I met you.
With my wonderful imagination I portrayed you and placed you in my frame of love.
But.....
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Akhtar Jawad 01 November 2017

Some realises too late that they had charming portrait in front of their eyes. But too late they appreciate it Especially when one is no more. A truth so nicely presented in beautiful lines.

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Amitava Sur 05 February 2014

Mostly we realize our diff stage of life after passing that particular period when we have already missed out a lot & ultimately we end with repentance for the rest of the life. This is very common with a sad end. Geetha- you presented it very rightly .... loved your elaboration

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Neela Nath Das 02 February 2014

Very tender outburst of emotion.We feel the person around whom we love.It happens actually.Geetha, you are creating a world of poetry, mixing the beauty of your mind with superb diction.

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Ramesh Rai 31 January 2014

What a lovely soft and tender emotions have been crafted throughout the poem. My ink would have been dried to express my feelings. Thank you for sharing and regards.

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Om Chawla 31 January 2014

Desires and expectations attract like a mirage but satisfaction has only to be found in what you achieve. Enjoyed reading this meaningful write. Many thanks for your appreciative comments on my poems 'Contours of Silence', 'I AM REMINDED...BARD'...

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Valsa George 30 January 2014

This poem is more insightful than it appears to be... We run after a mirage and leave behind the real! By the time we come back, it is too late! ! Great write Geetha! Enjoyed it! !

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Marvin Brato 29 January 2014

Indeed, we only realized the importance or value of a thing or person when its too late or gone!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 29 January 2014

This was touching and relatable. It made me realise we shudnt take our soulmates love forgranted. Sensational inspiring poem. Tc pal.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 29 January 2014

A very nie poem on realisation

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Lyn Paul 28 January 2014

Such beautiful words filled with a message so true. I agree so much with Deepak

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 27 January 2014

Very insightful.......Geetha.....your poems are as soulful as ever............I loved it so much....thanks for sharing

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 January 2014

Things change over time but old memories get fixed as they were long back. Nice poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 27 January 2014

Really your writing is charming and beautiful, thanks.

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Geetha Jayakumar

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