Tuesday, March 27, 2007

Your Call Comments

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I lay here in bed
and wait for your call
I lay here and die
but you won't call at all
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Sally Knox
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Stug Jordan 12 April 2007

Good one. You lie there waiting for something you know will never come. Something we all do but never talk about. You've talked about it. Well done for writing with honesty and having the skill to communicate it. S x

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Perry Busch 27 March 2007

Love is the strongest force one will ever incounter. To be without love is to not live. You have shown the emptiness that is felt when love has been allowed to faded or withheld without reason

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Sally Knox

Sally Knox

Lewistown, MT
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