Your Bedroom Eyes Comments
I want to see your bedroom eyes
looking into mine
I get lost in your green sea
staring back at me
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Such a wonderful and passionate poem on love you have written, dear 'Aqua Flower', that for sure came straight from the heart. It's nice to know you master such flowery expression, which cannot come unless some one is 'in love' and 'is loved'! Very well done, my dear poet. Keep going! Without the 'Poet; s Notes' too, I would have understood what 'green sea' meant! :)
Hello and thank you for reading this. It is true only one that's been in love can write like this. This is a repost from when I was originally on the site. It's one of my favorites! And I remember someone didn't understand green sea and what it meant that's why I put it in the notes. Glad you understood it without the notes.
A sea of passion this poem is, a sailers dream come true, contrary to popular opinion...a woman on ship can be a very good thing! Love your passion for love!
Thank you for your nice comment. Yes Sailors ships and women they go hand-in-hand. The sea is very romantic. Eyes like to see or even more romantic. Have a great day!
your bedroom eyes tell I am in a trance and under your spell Your passion flies in and I feel your love within captured by your green sea.......Touching expression. A beautiful love poem having full of romance has been hauntingly delineated. Thank u for sharing.10
Thank you for your comment. Love, I believe, is always seen in the eyes! :)
A strong poem on passion and romance being two sides of love. A 10.
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7/30/2025 11:32:45 AM # 1.0.0
A great poem full of passion! Splendid!
Thank you Kostas for your nice comment!