Your Bedroom Eyes Poem by Aqua Flower

Your Bedroom Eyes

Rating: 4.9


I want to see your bedroom eyes
looking into mine
I get lost in your green sea
staring back at me
as my body lays under yours
taken by you completely
your lips deeply kiss mine
as our tongues entwine
your bedroom eyes do tell
I am in a trance and under your spell
Your passion flies in
and I feel your love within
captured by your green sea
as you love me completely
I don't want to let go
of the magic that you bestow
let me look into your bedroom eyes
and wake up in your arms at sunrise

Copyright @ Aqua Flower

Sunday, July 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,passion,romance
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Note: Green Sea refers to his green eyes.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 17 July 2018

A great poem full of passion! Splendid!

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Aqua Flower 17 July 2018

Thank you Kostas for your nice comment!

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Riza Braholli 16 July 2018

Great this love poem... Big 10***********

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Aqua Flower 17 July 2018

A big 10! Grazie mille! :)

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Khairul Ahsan 16 July 2018

Such a wonderful and passionate poem on love you have written, dear 'Aqua Flower', that for sure came straight from the heart. It's nice to know you master such flowery expression, which cannot come unless some one is 'in love' and 'is loved'! Very well done, my dear poet. Keep going! Without the 'Poet; s Notes' too, I would have understood what 'green sea' meant! :)

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Aqua Flower 16 July 2018

Hello and thank you for reading this. It is true only one that's been in love can write like this. This is a repost from when I was originally on the site. It's one of my favorites! And I remember someone didn't understand green sea and what it meant that's why I put it in the notes. Glad you understood it without the notes.

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Bill Cantrell 15 July 2018

A sea of passion this poem is, a sailers dream come true, contrary to popular opinion...a woman on ship can be a very good thing! Love your passion for love!

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Aqua Flower 16 July 2018

Thank you for your nice comment. Yes Sailors ships and women they go hand-in-hand. The sea is very romantic. Eyes like to see or even more romantic. Have a great day!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 July 2018

your bedroom eyes tell I am in a trance and under your spell Your passion flies in and I feel your love within captured by your green sea.......Touching expression. A beautiful love poem having full of romance has been hauntingly delineated. Thank u for sharing.10

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Aqua Flower 15 July 2018

Thank you for your comment. Love, I believe, is always seen in the eyes! :)

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