Friday, March 9, 2012

Your Beauty Once Was Gold Comments

Rating: 4.5

Your beauty once was gold -
Brightly sung
-From the soothing voice of dusk
To a hooting owl behind the mask-
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Deniz Atay
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Chinedu Dike 11 April 2015

A lovely poem, well articulated and nicely written in poetic diction to capture a fascination that has run cold. Definitely a good piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 09 March 2012

Nice poem...simply written. Her beaulty was once gold....BRIGHTLY SUNG. Great sentiment...keep it up. You shud read my poem...Little cherry Gold...u might like it...thanks for sharing.

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