Your Beautiful Smile
Life is a mystical winding
Woven around happy and sad things
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Nice poem i love it well expressed and simply EXCELLENT.......... Guess Who
hey, nice poem, some really great imagery! there are some polysyllabic words that felt a bit out of place but maybe thats just me: D keep it up
I LOVE this poem its absolutely brilliant I can tell its well thought out :)
Seeing Light in a smile radiating from within, beauty revealed. Beautiful poem, I love the way you describe every detail and your observation is sublime.
Amidst the lingering tune of sadness of perishable world it's the beautiful smile of ladylove which wipes the grief of the sorrow burdened mind.The smile is thus drawn on the vast canvas of life.Moving.
A reservoir of beautiful and moving words that magically dance in every line of this touching write bringing harmony to the entire script! Well crafted with rich imagery! Wisdom is filtered through your magic pen! 10+++ Thank you for sharing once again and keep it up, young man! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!
It is grand. This is absolutely world class poetry...and I enjoyed reading. Keep writing.
It grand. This absolutely world class poetry...and I enjoyed reading. Keep writing.
A smile helps the world go around for everyone, a lovely poem
I smile everytime i read this......really sweet....fantastic..
Beautiful smile, A beautiful heaven craft was made Eternally touch your innocent face Shining my darkness like a moon at night Warm like every second hit by the day sunlight Beautiful smile easy to give but hard to keep When you feel bad just a smile because it a sign of a heaven made .....that is my version :) LOL credit for you as the owner of the original idea_Unwritten Soul
A smile that wins the heart is wonderful sign of love to be worshiped!
The melodramatic life has made me fragile Only to be protected and cared by your beautiful smile...........the power of smiling expressed in your poem thanks........parithi
when the beautiful smile unzips in the face of God's creation, you are aroused to the pinnacle of elation. Being caught into the web of complex life, the smile next to you is realised so late. Wonderful!
Life is a mystical winding.... true dear poet. A lovely poem.