Monday, March 19, 2012

Your Beautiful Smile Comments

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Your Beautiful Smile

Life is a mystical winding
Woven around happy and sad things
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Freespirit Juneja
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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 November 2022

Life is a mystical winding.... true dear poet. A lovely poem.

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Ankita Verma 17 September 2012

its really nice poem

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Guess Who 12 June 2012

Nice poem i love it well expressed and simply EXCELLENT.......... Guess Who

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Urshula Davis 07 June 2012

This rocks! Wow how beautiful! I enjoyed the read!

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Adam Lally 06 June 2012

hey, nice poem, some really great imagery! there are some polysyllabic words that felt a bit out of place but maybe thats just me: D keep it up

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Renu Kakkar 06 June 2012

A beautifully written poem....i enjoyed reading it

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Nova Saleh 05 June 2012

I LOVE this poem its absolutely brilliant I can tell its well thought out :)

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Kasia Fedyk 05 June 2012

Seeing Light in a smile radiating from within, beauty revealed. Beautiful poem, I love the way you describe every detail and your observation is sublime.

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Suzaku Vaneko 05 June 2012

Wow what an sweet beautifully written poem

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Neela Nath Das 05 June 2012

Amidst the lingering tune of sadness of perishable world it's the beautiful smile of ladylove which wipes the grief of the sorrow burdened mind.The smile is thus drawn on the vast canvas of life.Moving.

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Dalasce Virginia Nzawa 24 April 2012

am speechless, tis beautiful poetry

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Romeo Della Valle 22 April 2012

A reservoir of beautiful and moving words that magically dance in every line of this touching write bringing harmony to the entire script! Well crafted with rich imagery! Wisdom is filtered through your magic pen! 10+++ Thank you for sharing once again and keep it up, young man! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Benjamin Paa Willie 22 April 2012

It is grand. This is absolutely world class poetry...and I enjoyed reading. Keep writing.

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Benjamin Paa Willie 22 April 2012

It grand. This absolutely world class poetry...and I enjoyed reading. Keep writing.

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Heather Wilson 20 April 2012

A smile helps the world go around for everyone, a lovely poem

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Brianna Winebarger 20 April 2012

I smile everytime i read this......really sweet....fantastic..

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Unwritten Soul 18 April 2012

Beautiful smile, A beautiful heaven craft was made Eternally touch your innocent face Shining my darkness like a moon at night Warm like every second hit by the day sunlight Beautiful smile easy to give but hard to keep When you feel bad just a smile because it a sign of a heaven made .....that is my version :) LOL credit for you as the owner of the original idea_Unwritten Soul

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Ramesh T A 18 April 2012

A smile that wins the heart is wonderful sign of love to be worshiped!

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Parithi Muthurasan 17 April 2012

The melodramatic life has made me fragile Only to be protected and cared by your beautiful smile...........the power of smiling expressed in your poem thanks........parithi

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Rajendran Muthiah 15 April 2012

when the beautiful smile unzips in the face of God's creation, you are aroused to the pinnacle of elation. Being caught into the web of complex life, the smile next to you is realised so late. Wonderful!

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