I remember
vividly those serene eyes,
shining bright,
emotion in them
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Wow, what a poem! A nice choice of words in this poem. I Thanks for the sharing.
Eyes seeking me - glowing, like that first dew' work of excellent similes and metaphors.
And to fall for such eyes is no sin......You are in love and eyes are the door to heart.........10++
Reading this ws like reading ur own feelings dea..nicely expressed
Very nicely and aptly presented. Best word choice. True love expression, I like it. Many thanks.
Mesmerising eyes, perhaps that's why you couldn't help falling in love with them. Full marks.
Yet again a nice work...the choice of words and the resultant flow is enigmatic....keep it up.................
Eyes seeking me - glowing, like that first dew on the new viridescent blade of grass wow keep reading these lines...hypnotic lines
whatta an eyes.....you described well the eyes as the subject of this poem.....i am sppechless for this....expressive eyes, ...so sweet...cant find words to express my admiration on this poem..its so nice, , , cheers naizz
Wonderful; Rhythmic rhyme with alluring eyes! Krishna Baalu
Your eye's must have the eye's of a woman in love -just wonderful words top of the shop, regards Ken e
i liked it so much u had me until the last word...you are really talented...thanks for sharing
Your beautiful eyes profunder than sky deeper than blue ocean gentler than morning sun feeling my heart with divine love and fun. 10A+++++
Hi I’m just wondering if you are a journalist cause your poem was really nice