Your Beautiful Brown Eyes Comments

This is a great love poem, Cristina. The magic of loving eyes, full of wonder, wonderful! Keep writing Cristina, you are a talented poetess.

Lovely poem indeed. Would be even better with a few small fixes: Lines three, six and thirteen should have SHINING instead of SHINNING. Line eleven - - in English, we don't use double negatives like they do in Spanish, Portuguese, and other romance languages (probably including your native Romanian) . To be grammatically correct, this line should say NOTHING IN THIS WORLD MATTERS,

wow, this is amazing did he read it already he must be very proud and you are one good poet for having thought of a cute poem about his brown eyes MABUHAY

Hope that beautiful brown eyes read this...a beautiful colorful poem...When souls possessed by spirit of love that make writing move so 'wow' :) _Unwritten Soul