Saturday, December 17, 2016

Your Attention God! ! ! Comments

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Hope you, You God, that you remember you made us Humans,
like all creatures and mammals!

We Humans so, yet, left the Path of Nature Some where,
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Siddartha Montik
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Luz Hanaii 25 January 2020

" We made many wars..., know not why, and killed, Only had that witness of Blood that we spilled! " I bet if only the Leaders of countries fought for their countries, wars would end. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

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Uche Nwanze 08 August 2019

Well crafted and expressed... Mankind have strayed from the path. You poured out your heart into your ink

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Kyvin Nash 18 April 2019

Amen Siddartha, beautiful truth, yet to some its painful truth...so many people are in denial of the mess and sin we do every day, I remember the Bible mention that evil will increase, every time we think we getting wise, the more sinful we become, thanks for writing such a needed call.

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Julia Luber 20 February 2019

Does not seem to like the modern world at all.

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Srijita Mondal 15 February 2019

" We made many a borders but can not stop any birds across, we made Visas and papers for we do not see hearts as we all miss" Well penned poem

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valentin savin 10 February 2019

Different people and Nations have their own religions. God, no matter how omnipotent he is, can not cope alone with all our problems. We ourselves have to cry to each other: not to sin, not to kill, etc, to keep the commandments of God. We Russian, say: trust in God, but help yourself (do not sin) .

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Jeremy Horsford 31 October 2018

I had a wonderful conversation with an Uber driver not so long ago on this very subject. We concluded it with...peace would result in an untimely death for humans and we'll improve but we need time. Hopefully that time isn't taken away from us prematurely.

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Shurouk Hammoud 20 October 2018

the title itself is a poem, calling god is calling peace and love which is the most important wish of poet.

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Kyvin Nash 18 April 2019

True indeed Shurouk! ! !

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 August 2018

nice writing- we look at you God, for your attention Yes we look at you O' Dear GOD

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Thulani Khore 09 July 2018

The fact that people tried to create their own ways through ignorance led to mankind's self destruction...great work

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Daniel Omaya 06 July 2018

And when creating our borders, we forgot yours - of valleys, mountains, rivers, lakes and sea You gave us love, we opted for hate Montik, an amazing piece here!

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Alem Hailu G/kristos 09 June 2018

Yes it is high time mankind turn attention to God developing a tender heart.Thank you for sharing this interesting poem.

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Asif Andalib 07 May 2018

Dear Poet Beautiful write. I love it. Keep it up With Best Wishes Asif

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Dear Poet This Poem reflect the reality of that is happening right now, the truth is- we need God more than ever

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Sachin Brahmvanshi 07 March 2018

Yes respected poet, your poem really depicts the current human mentality..Very well penned! ! !

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Karen 05 February 2018

Very nicely created. Thumbs up

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Rosalinda Flores Martinez 27 January 2018

God is always good. Thank you for sharing and reaching us, here, in this expressive poem.

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Rommel Galicia 18 January 2018

Nice write, Siddartha! It’s all in us. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 December 2017

FOURTH and LAST PART I do hope my trying to explain in an easy way has success. But never forget that God loves us so very much. Thank you foir sharing this lovely poem, a thought provoking one. Brilliantly created and beautifully worded

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 December 2017

THIRD PART and that is very difficult must I say, but as long as we pray everyday to God to ask to forgive what we have done wrong, that will be OK in God's eyes. He loves mankind, and that are we, so much that He sent His Only Son to this forsaken world so that we can still reach Him and we finally worship and praise Him daily.

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