Your Attention God! ! ! Comments

" We made many wars..., know not why, and killed, Only had that witness of Blood that we spilled! " I bet if only the Leaders of countries fought for their countries, wars would end. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

Well crafted and expressed... Mankind have strayed from the path. You poured out your heart into your ink

Amen Siddartha, beautiful truth, yet to some its painful truth...so many people are in denial of the mess and sin we do every day, I remember the Bible mention that evil will increase, every time we think we getting wise, the more sinful we become, thanks for writing such a needed call.

Does not seem to like the modern world at all.

" We made many a borders but can not stop any birds across, we made Visas and papers for we do not see hearts as we all miss" Well penned poem

Different people and Nations have their own religions. God, no matter how omnipotent he is, can not cope alone with all our problems. We ourselves have to cry to each other: not to sin, not to kill, etc, to keep the commandments of God. We Russian, say: trust in God, but help yourself (do not sin) .

I had a wonderful conversation with an Uber driver not so long ago on this very subject. We concluded it with...peace would result in an untimely death for humans and we'll improve but we need time. Hopefully that time isn't taken away from us prematurely.

the title itself is a poem, calling god is calling peace and love which is the most important wish of poet.

nice writing- we look at you God, for your attention Yes we look at you O' Dear GOD

The fact that people tried to create their own ways through ignorance led to mankind's self destruction...great work

And when creating our borders, we forgot yours - of valleys, mountains, rivers, lakes and sea You gave us love, we opted for hate Montik, an amazing piece here!

Yes it is high time mankind turn attention to God developing a tender heart.Thank you for sharing this interesting poem.

Dear Poet Beautiful write. I love it. Keep it up With Best Wishes Asif

Dear Poet This Poem reflect the reality of that is happening right now, the truth is- we need God more than ever

Yes respected poet, your poem really depicts the current human mentality..Very well penned! ! !

Very nicely created. Thumbs up

God is always good. Thank you for sharing and reaching us, here, in this expressive poem.

Nice write, Siddartha! It’s all in us. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

FOURTH and LAST PART I do hope my trying to explain in an easy way has success. But never forget that God loves us so very much. Thank you foir sharing this lovely poem, a thought provoking one. Brilliantly created and beautifully worded

THIRD PART and that is very difficult must I say, but as long as we pray everyday to God to ask to forgive what we have done wrong, that will be OK in God's eyes. He loves mankind, and that are we, so much that He sent His Only Son to this forsaken world so that we can still reach Him and we finally worship and praise Him daily.