Friday, January 22, 2021

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Rating: 4.9

I stood like a rock near the sea
In a hope that you might come
Riding on the waves.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Zuzu Mutairi 25 January 2021

Yes a purpose for life to live and enjoy.

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Rajnish Manga 25 January 2021

And you came, unannounced from nowhere straight to my heart Giving life to the statue.... //.... Absolutely brilliant poetic expression of a lover's heart which longed for a union with his beloved having employed various ways and means to realise it.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 24 January 2021

A very lovely poem Asim ji. It breezes into your heart like a scented fragrance. Top stars

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Varsha M 23 January 2021

This is really beautiful. You have penned it so well. It's as fresh as free flowing river

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 January 2021

Riding on the waves a life is beautifully perceived. In the dark moon shows the path. This poem is really beautiful with many more stars.

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Kostas Lagos 23 January 2021

This is truly perfect!

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Anjandev Roy 22 January 2021

Delightful piece.....thank u, dear poet.

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Ricky Manhatten 22 January 2021

Very interesting poem. I climbed the walls like vines In a hope that you might stop by To smell my extremely distinctive fragrance.

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Suzon Albert 22 January 2021

Worth waiting for love. End is wonderful.

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Michael Jack 22 January 2021

Giving mean to a life..And you came, unannounced from nowhere straight to my heart Giving life to the statue.

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Deepak S S 22 January 2021

Love comes unannounced, marvelous feeling in love nicely captured.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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