Saturday, February 24, 2018

Your Absent Face Comments

Rating: 5.0

In Memory of Kathleen Raine

When I stretched out my right hand
to touch your face, mysteriously present,
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Daniel Brick
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Glen Kappy 25 February 2018

this is tender and lovely, daniel, and good because there is no artifice. just you, as it appears to me, speaking straight and flowingly (because of your facility from years of writing) from your loving heart. once again the description of this life as bitter-sweet comes to mind. comfort to you, friend. -glen

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Rini Shibu 25 February 2018

Great poem Daniel..loved every line

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Daniel Brick 25 February 2018

And I enjoyed writing every line of it: it just swept through me

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 February 2018

Daniel, such a heartwarming poem...10++++

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Liza Sudina 25 February 2018

A very tender poem, dear Daniel!

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Daniel Brick 25 February 2018

Tenderness was my goal and I'm glad you sensed it. We need to bring more tenderness into the world and shower people with it.

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St. Paul MN
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