Makayla Straight

Makayla Straight

I was Born in Tuscon Then I moved to Phoenix
Sunday, July 19, 2009

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I look at you I see a man
But not just a man
A man with a past
A man with big dreams
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Makayla Straight
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Eyan Desir 22 July 2009

Well line 11 has a mistake.... Ok about this poem...I wonder you this man is.....? Well is not me....readers.... You see a man...hmmmm this poem makes me think....... very interesting....and well expressed maybe i should tell this man you are a good girl......hahaha anyway you did well and I enjoy this poem With your mystery man............

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Makayla Straight

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I was Born in Tuscon Then I moved to Phoenix
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