Saturday, November 22, 2008

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We will together always be,
Love is only you and me.
when i melt into your loving eyes,
You're perfect for me i realize.
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tanvi damle
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Sebastine Humaemo 23 December 2008

' You're the one who touched my heart, Never shall we drift apart '......... ................................best lines you can give to your loved one.........lovely....one of your best poems....sebastine....10++.........

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Kesav Easwaran 27 November 2008

love in prayer and prayer in love...a love poem written with deep sentiment and true involvement...nice to read...ten for you Tanvi...

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C. P. Sharma 23 November 2008

tanvi, God bless you. You will mature into a great poetess one day. Keep it up. But this love may not be an infatuation! 10/10 CP

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Aashish Kalra 23 November 2008

Truly LOVE...

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Andrew Rose 23 November 2008

A loving strong poem, as is the rest. keep it up and im sure youll write some amazing stuff

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Lee Jackson 22 November 2008

You capture my thoughts almost completely. Perfect. Was this wrote from a married prospective? or a close relationship? Very entrancing poem

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This poem shows so much love for your lover it so heartwarming...wow! Thanks 10/10

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