Sunday, March 13, 2016

Young Woman Fixing Her Hair Comments

Rating: 5.0

She sits at a table facing the large windows,
In this brightly lit bookstore café;
Laptop open, she types scholarly for long minutes.
I sit in a low leather chair at a right angle to her,
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Bill Galvin
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Mike Smith 14 March 2016

I feel as if I'd lived it myself. Incredible description. You include just enough detail to make visible every aspect of this event. You avoid becoming detailed beyond need. The perfect balance. And the conclusion is spot on. Thanks Bill for sharing

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Bill Galvin 14 March 2016

Thank you, Mike. I'm always working to create the perfect poem, as we all are.

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