Tuesday, December 13, 2011

Young, Timeless Love Comments

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Is it possible to feel like a child at such a wise age
Mind spinning like a merry-go-round
Rhythm of there hearts like a rope in double-dutch
Eyes wide with excitement and wonder
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Ivory Irving
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Ivory Irving 13 December 2011

Thank you so much. I appreciate the feedback. Honestly, thank you.

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Unwritten Soul 13 December 2011

Innocence in kid time makes all of us cant feel it again, as we see the true world and growing in different direction than we take when we was a kid...This is lovely poem, and full of age discover, time wanderer..nice one_Unwritten SOul

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Ivory Irving

Ivory Irving

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