Young September Comments

Months around in your finger tips, and look you have awesome life trips...i like the way you manipulating the year tour but i like this line most 'Kingdom for a warm July'...Have a good year hope all months give better than your expectation...then smile with those goldtooth hahha joking_Unwritten Soul

Very nice flow, love your poem! .. I also wish to go back to July, because, couldn't been a lizard on a beach this summer (waited for it all year! !) , right now watching the cloudy sky and as you say the coughing October I see coming near.. A sigh and a tiny tear dance in the corner of my eye when I think of the exasperating looong winter, I will not watch the gray sky but try to have a lift up not from the kisses of sun but from the mountains of snow piled high on the edge of the road..another sigh..I go now, singing: 'and I would give it all away I would give it all up kingdom for a little sunshine kingdom for a warm July' Thank you for share,10