Young Rebel Comments

Your poem reminds me of a song by Jeremy Fisher about a hapless young fellow smitten by a girl who runs guns. He says, ' Her love is a scar that never heals.' The best words I've 'heard' tonight are '..like a lynx on the prowl past the fox and the owl..'

You shore aren't the marryin' type pardner...[mebbe fictitious on paper, that is], but is she a dream or? ? By the way, 'appy 56th birthday in advance. Keep writin pardner.. Cheers. Subroto

Very creative picture of a young rebel, without sin life'd boring! Well done; -) Take care, Martine

well... its fantastic write! ! ! knowing that i am also such a rebellious brat... the youngest of the three sisters in our fam.... love this line... she breezes the ground without sound and I know you won't find that she's the marrying kind there's no part of her heart to be found

Fabulous imagery Lee! You must have been quite a lad! You certainly had all the best answers for your parents you, young rebel you! 10 Karin Anderson

Awesome! ! well written and it's easy to read.

This poem has its own amazing flavour tinge and taste...wonderful...i relished...10

oh wow that poem was amazing i love it that is one of my favorites

Wonderful pace. Galloping along... with or without a cause....? t x

touching poem, i the way you twist your words together, some of the deeper meanings to this are a little over my head but i like the poem non the less.

I think you were daring.

interesting poem........a poetic dialogue with morals to think about.

another mind captivating write 10+

Talent, charm and intelligence combined in young rebellion. I enjoy it. Keep it up. CP

ah the rebel has found hs cause....'no part of her heart to be found', , , , would he have it any other way.....no challenge in the predictable, , , , mysterical....exotic...maybe with a touch of Lee Spillane, , , ,

Good write with a story and had an excellent flow and sturcture with it... Bonnie

Brilliant write. It sparked so many different ideas into my mind. It also gave me great understanding and visuals.

Excellent write Lee...did make me smile at the last two lines though...Fi 10+++

Has the same wittiness as Angel's Place.

10+ i enjoy reading it