Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, August 21, 2014

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Africa needs sacrifice
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"Head shall bow for country
And for the powerful creator and almighty
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Geetha Jayakumar 21 August 2014

Very beautiful message you have conveyed through this poem. I want young people of patriotic nature To come forward and make sure Country can not be taken to safety Until people are poverty stricken and living with pity A thoughtful message for youngsters. They can do a lot for our country. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2014

Good poem Jason Campbell21 minutes ago Strong and emotive. Feelings against injustice Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2014

Great poem Thandiwe Nyamasvisva23 minutes ago And I am not just saying that because I am an African myself! However the last two paragraphs seem very contradictory. Was that an error or intentional? Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago not intentional.. strongly needed awareness among people

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2014

Africa needs sacrifice Fully pledged promises

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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