Young Mother Comments

Awesome flight of imagery that has portrayed wonderfully the feelings of joy as also panic created by the actions of a small baby in young mother.

I only can say: Wonderful words. Tilly Boesche-Zacharow

With the muse of the young father around her. Nice work.

It shows the care and fear of a young mother who is not yet familiar with the tricks of the motherhood. Lovely poem. Thanks, Robert.

..........oh! ..the mother's love and concern for her babe is penned perfectly...love this ★