Tuesday, February 13, 2007

Young Love Comments

Rating: 2.8

A boy and girl are playing games,
Dressed so neatly, calling out names;
The field has grass that’s very green;
There’s none to witness this great scene!
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Dr John Celes
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Raul Castelan 16 July 2007

Awe, what a wonderful poem you put here. The rhyming just made it ever so sweet. GOOD READ!

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Malini Kadir 29 May 2007

Amidst the foliage, sunlight beams! .........lovely!

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