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Deep inside a silent slumber
Out and beneath the uncut lumber
The ebb and flow of a divine breeze
While lying on a bed of leaves
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A nice poetic imagination, Deeds. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
Wandering eyes reduced to a gleam Balmy palms are gaining steam Young love, young love, you reign supreme. a mysterious experience....... that is love...... your word coining that let you express yourself in wonderful images..... just superb indeed. tony
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7/29/2025 2:43:27 AM # 1.0.0
Passionate and lofty verse written with clarity of thought and mind. Beautiful love poem embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Jake.