Sunday, October 23, 2011

Young Love Comments

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Since elementary school they became friends
They knew this friendship would never end.
She was seven, he was eight, but their lives
Were put in the hands of faith,
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Earl Clark 29 October 2011

Nice poem about young love- it seems to build up from the first part to the second. Giving a history then soaring- are you related to Shakespeare?

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Hans Vr 28 October 2011

A beautiful poem, a pleasure to read, provoking sweet memories.

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