Thursday, August 17, 2006

Young Lady In Search! Comments

Rating: 5.0

How does one explain such contrasting beauty
a love so adored yet so unfulfilling
an apaisement to the naked eye
yet in a small twist of fate, appalling
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Original Unknown Girl 03 November 2006

I love this one Geoff... especially the final two stanzas, the part where you talk about mother giving love but child not receiving it.... it certainly packs a punch! Love it! HG xx

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M S 26 October 2006

wow, Geoff... this is simply exquisite... the dicotamy, the entrapment, the images... honestly, i'm stunned. this is going straight to my faves. take my 10, wordsmith! Cheers, Masha

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Nimal Dunuhinga 10 October 2006

Excellent! A true identity of a fragile soul? Young Lady in search!

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