Friday, June 27, 2008

Young I Am. Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you disbelieve my Writes, then you can go to Hell!
I'll write vividly of your trip with Blood from my ink pale.

Young I am, but not a dunce.
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Kyle Shield Laster
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Nicely Done, this one gave me chills......=)

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Tyease Collins 28 June 2008

awesome...short but really gets to the point **tyease**

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Margaret Serrano 28 June 2008

Kyle, you are brilliant! ! Keep on writing!

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Sandra J. 27 June 2008

that sucks if someone questioned it was you, i know it probably seems like im your poem stalker person, but since the first poem you wrote, i was hooked :) . anyways thanks, you're a great writer, i hope no one discourages you.

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Kyle Shield Laster

Kyle Shield Laster

Clarksdale, Mississippi
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