Young Girl's Lament Comments

A refined poetic imagination, Shannon Chapel. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.

I agree, you have to have love of self!

Shannon this is great, a powerful message, and so true - I know many people going down this road - unfortunately it may be more than just this poem to make them realise. Lovely poem though Moyaxx

How right you are, Ernestine! lol I guess that's what I get for trying to write at 1: 00 AM. I fixed the spelling, and thanks for pointing it out. Shannon xoxo

Jolly good shannon, another good one from you. Can I ask in the last line, is 'conscious' correct or is it perhaps 'conscience'. Just my reading of it, but you may be right all along. Love Ernestine XXX