Monday, October 13, 2008
Young Girl Comments
Rating: ★5.0
There she stands starring at the ground,
Unaware of what's happening all around,
Why is she sad, what does she know,
What could have happened to fill her with woe?
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lindsey ashton
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Ian Bowen
15 October 2008
Lindsey, much to like in your poem. The ending was unexpected on my part, and I always enjoy getting caught out. Well penned.10/10 Ian
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11/2/2025 1:46:49 PM # 1.0.0
Is she you? If she is, you are a person a little lock in yourself, and with pretty words written in your head. If she isn't, it's a nice poem! ^^