Saturday, September 21, 2013

Young Girl Comments

Rating: 3.0

She lives like the Sun gallops through the day
She laughs like the Ocean's steady sway
Her tears fall like hellfire upon her breasts
She dreams she died a thousand deaths
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Patricia Grantham 11 April 2015

A very energetic and fantastic poem written about a young girl. Fresh from the mind of a poet as yourself. Enjoyed this.

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