Saturday, May 9, 2009

Young Couples First Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

a young couple walking the darkness at night
wanting to experience their first kiss of delight.
he had a knot in his stomach which he could
not explain, and she like him felt the same.
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2009

a young couple walking the darkness at night wanting to experience their first kiss of delight. he had a knot in his stomach which he could not explain, and she like him felt the same.......great dilema but beautifully expressed in wordds... i loved it most....10 read mien love at first sight... friendship on line

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Sandra Fowler 12 May 2009

Time will have us all, but memories are forever. Nice one. Kind regards, Sandra

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Kranthi Pothineni 11 May 2009

Memories are the place were most of us live in. Good one.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 10 May 2009

the rememberance of that fist kiss will always stay, it is a memory that will never go away........................A Passionate Write.........

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charming an delightful poem.

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Heather S 09 May 2009

awww, this is such a cute poem and i hope that one day i will feel the same about someone in my life thanks for making my day heather

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