Monday, October 29, 2007

Young Chickens Comments

Rating: 4.5

These balls of fluff, so small and light,
They make a sweet and delicate sight.

With tiny beaks and dewdropp eyes,
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Paul Butters
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Original Unknown Girl 08 October 2008

Damn gorgeous. It strengthened in imagery almost as if you made it that way.? ? The final stanza's descriptives are sublime. HG: -) xx

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The title made me (me with my filthy mind n all) think of something different and so of course I had to read and... I am so, so glad I did..... humbled. You reawake things, P, first and foremost, appreciation. t x

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Marc Mannheimer 29 October 2007

Wonderful! A subject matter I might write about, but not a talent in description I could reach - for now.

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