Young Butterflies Comments

Young butterflies, Listen to the echo of the wind And let Mother Nature Takes its course! .....superb dedication.... excellent poem.... great poetic writings....10++

Perfect analogy.... a very good message to the youngsters

INSPIRED POETRY POET FRIEND Your butterflies implies young teens lovely ones taking wings upon shoulders and sprouting water springs as to them happiness you bring butterflies about you swing they love a fling is it not so I know the butterflies lie and lay low as they know towards heaven they will go as winds of fortune at them you blow they will all show.. as they lie low and finally in candles a flame glow like flamingos

the hurt inflicted in our young hearts will remain with us for ever.. so it is better to follow the advice of elders instead of getting into trouble in the name of adventure and fun..Well done, Romeo

Gem of a poem for budding butterflies waiting to fly mostly not knowing what, why, where, with whom and how. Great job.

Romeo, your poetry, voice and attitude to life is an inspiration to us all. Thank you for your continuing inspiration in your great verses.

In a world where young ones are always in hurry to get ahead this beautiful poem with sound advice is a welcome break. Loved the presentation.

Very nice.Young butterfly is restless and enthusiastic to fly high unable to comprehend the danger.sound advice to it.Liked it.

I like this poem my friend. Great analogy. Congrats and well deserved 'poem of the day!

Beautifully done. Wonderful advice, not just for butterflies and teenagers, but for everyone. Congratulations on having it selected as Member Poem of the Day! Please read my poem BUTTERFLY OF DEATH. Thanks.

Young butterflies Let your wings grow Until they are ready to flap- - - A very sound advice for the young who are impatient and court danger without giving proper thoughts for preparation and consequences.

Take my advice. With the muse of love and nature. Nice work.

Such a beautiful dedication to our youth and lovely to see your name in lights. Thank You Romeo.

Thoughtful poem with a lovely theme young butterflies...makes the reader sea the flutter of wings nice to reader you again...don't the years fly by...regards

Congratulations, a well deserved selection as members' poem of the day. It's a wonderful poem with a great message to the teenagers.

This was a perfect poem to send me too after your comment & I'm sure you did it tactically. Thank you for the advice my brother. It was not overlooked. Thank you once again -Stevens Cadet

Wow, this poem contains some of the best advice ever we can give to our teens. Superb poem Excellent!

Nice advice, it is not only for butterflies but for all and our all actions should be done at the right time. well penned. take care my brother. and always be happy.. May God bless you. Regards.

Its quite spectacular, how the correlation to butterflies and the youth are related. I enjoyed it!

Beautiful! Outstanding! No, that's really amazing! Our life is the like the life of the butterfly, we yet believe that we can fly before our wings grow till we fall on our heads.. Your writes are amazing, and you attract the reader's mind to it, keep up the good work, Sir :) 10+++