Thursday, November 17, 2022

Young At Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Evil never feels old
He wakes up each morning
and after brushing
his teeth
...
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M.J. Lemon
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Susan Williams 22 January 2023

what a powerful and heart-shivering expose of Evil, you have power, my friend, to shake people with your poetry===highest of marks and faving this so I will read it again and again so I might know my enemy. Satan

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M.J. Lemon 12 February 2023

Thank you Susan! It is so unfortunate that enemy may seem so ordinary or common in appearance.

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Congratulations, Mr Lemon. This wonderful poem is ranked #27 on the Best Poems of Members on PoemHunter today. This induced me to make a revisit, for which I am thankful to PoemHunter. And Congratulations to You, dear poet.

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M.J. Lemon 07 December 2022

Yes it does seem to be doing well. Thank you for your support.

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Sorry, everyone. The rank is 81

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Congratulations, dear poet M J Lemon! Today this poem has been included in the Best Poems Of Member Poets, featured on PoemHunter, at rank # 83. Congratulations. Well done you surely deserve this recognition.

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Rob Lamberton 01 December 2022

Even after years of experience we can live a life of denial by following after ancient deceptions.

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M.J. Lemon 01 December 2022

So true, Rob. And thank you for reading.

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Sandra Feldman 30 November 2022

So true, so true! And how well it is presented and written is a very sincere compliment and admiration of It and You. To my favorites is not enough, this one goes to my memory and heart with full admiration, too!

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M.J. Lemon 01 December 2022

Sandra, thank you so very much.

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Richard Wlodarski 30 November 2022

This is such a refreshingly youthful take on an ancient theme. Leave it to M.J. to never make us feel old! As always, I really loved reading the poem!

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M.J. Lemon 01 December 2022

Thank you so much, Richard. I always appreciate your insights.

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Risa Kavak Asir 17 November 2022

'Jumping the Snake' reminds me of Evel Knievel and his motorcycle exploits. Wasn't it the Snake River that he tried to jump over?

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M.J. Lemon 22 November 2022

Indeed it was Evel who tried to Jump the Snake River Canyon. Thanks so much for reading about evil and Evel!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 November 2022

Really like this one MJ TFS

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M.J. Lemon 22 November 2022

Much appreciated, LeeAnn. Thanks so much.

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